A combination of bad animation and too much cliché
- There was no story
- The action, of whitch the entire work seemed too exist, were clichés seen in at least 5.987.331 other films.
- Your drawings of characters are, imo, bad
- Your drawings of backgrounds (i think you used way too little bg-art) were very poor.
- The music only added to the cliché/stolen effect, I think you just ripped the music from a matrix/god of war soundtrack-cd.
For the effort of making this I can give you 3 points, but next time, try to look into the details before you start animating.
Action is, most of the time, not enough to entertain a viewer these days.
And last, but not least, try to develope your drawing skills (or if you've drawn this with a mouse; buy a drawing tablet).