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A combination of bad animation and too much cliché

- There was no story
- The action, of whitch the entire work seemed too exist, were clichés seen in at least 5.987.331 other films.
- Your drawings of characters are, imo, bad
- Your drawings of backgrounds (i think you used way too little bg-art) were very poor.
- The music only added to the cliché/stolen effect, I think you just ripped the music from a matrix/god of war soundtrack-cd.

For the effort of making this I can give you 3 points, but next time, try to look into the details before you start animating.
Action is, most of the time, not enough to entertain a viewer these days.
And last, but not least, try to develope your drawing skills (or if you've drawn this with a mouse; buy a drawing tablet).

beautiful

Beautiful animation style, took a lot of effort probably, it did pay off!
The story-line was ok though, a lot of clichées, it was all a very familiar story-line, kind of standard. Maybe you could work on that, it's at least as important as the artwork :)

It was okay...

The story was really amusing, the artwork and animation though, weren't very impressive...
And the sounds on the characters movements were too much of a 80's cartoon cliche...

Nice

I love your animating style, I could see you put a lot of effort into making all this.
No story off course, or a very thin one, that didn't interest me at all.
The graphics and animations were great, you managed to put all major movie effects into one animation, great job.
I would like to see you put some artwork in your following animations, because this was all made out of very basic shapes and required no drawing skills of any kind.

Artwork was great... but it wasn't interesting.

Great artwork and beautiful animation, but you should think of a better script in your future works.
This was kind of repetitive and it has a lot of cliches in it (the glowing dove for example...)
If you are original in both story-writing ánd animation I think you will be able to make very good shorts, but with this one I just feel like you took a wrong turn.
I have to agree with the other reviewers, you have a lot of potential, but next time try to be a little more original in your story-line.

Wow...

This was great, it really calmed me down...
The only thing I didnt like was the ending, too sudden...
Would have been better if it had a definite ending...
Still, 10/10... Great stuff!

Stomme Amerikanen

Wtf, goeie shit gasten.
Ik hou van PLAS producties.
Leuk muziekje en grappige animatie.
Iedereen die dit niet grappig vind is een beetje gek.

Good!

Great animation, the setting was really creepy.
Could have been a little longer though...
4/5

touching

Really well directed, it had a truly mystic storyline...
I loved it, I found it really inspirating.
Thanks for that.
9/10

Awesome entry!

This is great!
Its really cool how much effects someone can create using those controls.
The animation was smooth and wel done.
The only way to screw up this animation is to use the controls in a wrong way.
Sound was okay, I didnt really think it was special...
10/10, and you deserve it!

Dick Bogers @frPOW

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